Yay, this was fun to do ! This is the animatic for the first sequence of the short animation I am planning to do. I'll start with that and then we'll see later with the rest of the sequences if I get a chance to do them. Comments are welcome !
It looks really good!! Great stuff. I'm a big fan of the way you handled cuts and transitions. I know you maybe not be looking for feedback, but the first cut from the OTS to the CU knuckles crack - maybe flip the OTS, so she's facing screen left. Feels like it's breaking the 180 rule - I know it's 2 different characters, but the transition and shot might be smoother if you flipped it.